Prompt 6: Bodyswap/Modern Romance

FL in Trouble:

FL wants to become a strong boy since young because her father often abuses her and her mother;

ML wants to have companion since his parents often leave him alone since he was young;

FL changes her soul with ML and has no experience with his job;

What will she do when she has ML’s body?

Why her father abuses her?

Why she tolerates everything?

Opening Scene for Reference:

1 Protagonists are astonished to find that they exchange their souls when they wake up.

2 They have to work at each other’s workplace. For ML, the fast-food restaurant; for FL, the law firm.

3 The ML refuses to give money to the father of FL who is a alcoholic.

4 Then the father tries to beat the ML, which is prevented by the FL. Her father said, “Give me money or I will stay here.” The FL, out of fear, pays him. It is in the restaurant that they two meet each other and realize they exchange souls.

5 They make an appointment during lunchtime when the ML points out the FL’s weakness. The FL gets angry and ashamed.

6 The FL has problems with the ML’s work, so she goes to the restaurant to ask for help. They exchange their telephone number to stay in touch. The FL gets shy for her previous attitude towards the ML.

7 They set rules for each other, preventing people around them from finding something wrong. The FL has to explain her background which arouses the ML’s sympathy.

8 The FL returns the ML’s home only to find that there is a nobody waiting for her, realizing that the ML is lonely.

9 They exchange their souls again when they try to sleep. The FL is free from her father’s abuse because of her money paid before, which dawns on her that the ML has something she does not have.

10 The ML’s souls returns his body, but he finds that he has no companion like the FL, a gentle mother and a lovely sister. Loneliness shrouds him.

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