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A little mishap
Hello, readers.
I Hezz Dan is awfully sorry about something. Just found out that one chapter is outa place.
You see you need to read 'Transdimensional before the two 'door of destiny's (s). Those are chapter titles. Just a little mix up. Hope you get over it. And understand the story.
Thank you guys for following my book and having a good read. It means the world to me, that's what I live for.
Hope you found the adventure of Tom Salisbury great as you venture with us through time and memories.
Leave a note and a nice review, though honest takes the preference and brutally honest if you must be. Take my hands as I take yours and let us ride this wave. It's what we live for.
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