why is it not right?

"fuck! You're loosing so much blood" Hardin said looking at her jacket already soaked with her blood.

"Keeps driving don't worry about me" Ulan said groaning in pains, he's right about that she's loosing do much blood and it's starting to weak her cell and she doubt she can keep her conscious at this rate.

"Hey wake up, don't close that eyes" Hardin slap her cheek softly to keep her awake.

"We loose them?' she asked looking back with her eyelid shivering,if she wasn't on the same spot it won't weak her this much.

"Yes I think we lost them now,wait I will get you" Hardin pack the car roughly and get out the car and heads to her sit,open the car and help her put of the car.

"You're slow,hold on to me tight!" He said ad left her up to his back.

"You shouldn't be doing this" Ulan said as he walks more faster heading to a under ground car pack, he open one of the car and put her inside,he start the car engine and drives straight ahead of him.

"What? are you insane?! That's a dead end" Ulan