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Chapter 29
Marvin Sullivan is trying to be one step ahead of the serial killer. He wanted to know what her next move is going to be. He wanted to hit two birds in one stone, finally catching the killer and preventing another death. Their department has been in a horrible spot since the serial killing begin. They haven't had any concrete lead or valid witness.
Ever since his youngest daughter's death, Marvin hasn't talked to his wife. Mainly because she was always avoiding him. Every time he comes home, she would leave or lock herself inside the guest the room. His older daughters are all doing the same thing. They all love their youngest sister that they blame their own father for her death.
"Man, we've been at this for days. All those men that we were monitoring, they don't seem to be in danger. I think we got this all wrong." Fred commented after six hours of watching the house of one of their suspected target.
"Damn it! Damn it! Damn it!" Marvin repeatedly hit the dashb
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