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We approached the house and the guards forced me out of the car like a slave that had just been brought to her master. I had my baby tightly tucked in my chest. "Hold on, be careful with the baby." He said to one of the bodyguards who brought us.Everyone was standing with crossed arms wondering what their Alpha wants to do with a rogue whore and her baby, because as far as they know, every lady with a baby without her mate is a rogue whore.He instantly snarled at them ordering everyone to go inside and go back to their duty post.He was glaring at my baby with so much love and excitement in his eyes but didn't want anyone knowing he is the father. He didn't want them finding out that he is the one that got me pregnant."Take this slut and her baby to the guest room upstairs, please get the little baby some new clothes and ask the mother questions on what the Son needs." He enjoined his maids.One of the guards, who was the same guy that shoved me to my room the very first day that I
"Please go away! I shrieked at her.She made her way out and I slammed the door. I pushed my baby to one corner of the bed while I lay beside him to get energy to shower.Just when I thought I could have some momentary rest a knock came at the door again. I wobbly stood up, rubbing my tired eyes and I said: "who please?""Open the door is Diana." I sighed."You are putting your life and that of your child at risk, I met the New nanny along the hallway and she said you had rejected her service, you are trading on the lions lane, I hope you are ready!" She said, making a pitiful face."You are just an ordinary rogue whom I think Alpha Leo must have picked up to help and you are here displaying all this." She said angrily.I narrowed down my eyes while making a cheesy grin. I became more upset but I had to manage to control my anger over that."These are packs of formula for your baby. Alpha Leo has instructed you to go through them in case you don't like them so I can make another order
As he continued to approach me, my entire body began to tremble. I wouldn't say for sure what exactly that was for. It could be anxiety, it could also be my wolf calling out for her mate.His face became stoic and stony. His unfriendly blue gaze snapped me as he kept looking at my face.He grabbed my waist pushing me closer to him and sniffed my nose. His body at some point too began to shake but I noticed he kept fighting his emotions and remained blank..The more I want to push him off from my body the more my body desires his touch."Seat down."He said to me with a gentle yet authoritative voice. He gestured to the seat directly opposite him and I carefully sat down. I took a deep breath, breaking my fingers to ward off the fears that tried to set in."You have to eat, " he said to me, smiling.I became more and more worried about his Mr nice behavior and I wondered what he could be hiding. He opened the first plate and took one piece of the meat and ate."Eat young lady." He comm
"Everyone has rejected me. My mate also just told me in my face that he would never have anything to do with me." I thought to myself while tears continued to decorate my face. "I am giving you 24 hours to let me know your decisions regarding my proposal.One more thing, you are not to mention this to anyone, it is a secret and shall be till you die. Never step foot in this territory again." He added. I raised my face up and shook my head. I stood up and muttered the courage to look him in the face and i said, "I Elina would never let you have my baby, I don't need your money, I don't need you either as a mate, in fact now more than ever I regret that you are my mate and I reject you too!" I let out a cry and fell to the ground. I growled. "You don't have a better option, the only available option is to behead you but before doing that I would take your son away from you, have you thrown in prison then I will have you suffer while you watch another woman take care of your son before
The Moon goddess has deserted me. My life makes no sense anymore. I am just a weak mother who couldn't do anything watching her son being taken away from her. Few minutes later a knock came to the door."Alpha Leo has asked me to move you to your room, you have to pick up every valuable item and follow me.” He said to meI grabbed my belongings and did not want to talk to him, since I was clearly instructed by Alpha Leo not to talk carelessly to his workers.As we walked through the hallway, I snapped my eyes around to see if I could see my son or even hear him cry. Unfortunately I didn't see him nor did I hear his cry."Where could he be? Looks like they have taken him to another place." I thought under my breath."Miss, this is the room where you would be staying henceforth." The guard said to me.He opened the door, and pushed me inside. The place is nothing good when compared to where I was coming from, the foam in here is smaller, the room doesn't have enough space like the othe
Elina's POV.I have been here for 4 hours now and no one has shown concern nor looked at my face. I am starving, the last time I ate food was with Alpha Leo earlier today. I haven't heard my baby cry. I hope he is doing alright."I need to break off from this place. I need to fight to get my son, Alpha Leo can't continue to treat me like this. I may have to tell my father." I thought to myself."You don't have to tell your father, you are strong. You can do it, just think well." A strange voice echoed in my ear.I looked around but I didn't see anyone. This is not the first time. I hear strange voices especially in times like this. What could it mean?" I questioned myself.Suddenly, I noticed that the corridor light was lit again. I walked close to the door and peeped through the tiny hole but was unable to see anyone. I tried to walk back to my bed then I heard voices."Sir she is in there?" "You may go now Diana " I heard those conversations and tried to figure out those voices, th
Author's POVValen continued to check tirelessly in all the secret rooms he knew but still couldn't find the particular room where Elina's son could be. And just when he was about to give up, he heard the cry of a baby. He listened carefully to know which of the rooms the cry had come from. When he confirmed the room,he instantly left to come back later when Alpha Leo leaves for his meeting.Valen went to his balcony, there was a fancy sofa there and he sat down on it waiting patiently for Alpha Leo to leave the house. He wouldn't stop to look at every car that leaves the pack house.Few minutes later, he discovered that he had left and rushed to the secret room to check up on Elina's son.Meanwhile, The nanny had just bathed the boy and was able to make him sleep after hours of crying. The baby misses his mother and wouldn't stop crying.Valen knocked at the door."Who is that? She asked."I am Alpha Leo's beta, Valen. Please open the door." He said to her.She became so terrified as
Valen came home with the duplicate keys and quickly rushed to Elina's room.He opened the door and Elina was shocked thinking it could be Alpha Leo, but surprisingly to her is Valen. "Valen, what are you doing here?" She asked excitedly."I have good news for you, you are leaving this place tonight!" Elina jumped up and began to scream for joy but Valen closed her mouth as someone could hear them."Thank you so much Valen. I don't know what I could have done without you. Please how is it going to be possible since the entire pack house is surrendered by security guards?" Elina asked him "Don't worry about the security guards, I will come up with something about that. Meanwhile, here is the key to this room." He handed the key to her.Elina was so surprised that she couldn't contain the happiness. She placed her hands on her mouth expressing how surprised she was. She knew she would be leaving the pack house alive but not so soon."Elina, you have not been eating your food, see how s