Chapter 25: Such a Scary Thing (Part 2)

——*Kennedi's POV——*

I said, "I'm not choosing him over you. I missed you more than you know. I wanted to run back every night but that's a long distance. I just wish you'd stop acting funny."

Locked Chapter

Continue to read this book on the APP

Comments (5)

MiracleJ

you see it early

lgenneken

Does she need to watch her friend Sierra? It would seem Sierra has some feelings for Elias.

MiracleJ

It might not just be you that thinks this way, but this is a series and this is the way I wanted to write it

MiracleJ

If you’re not into it, then quit reading. I can take criticism, but don’t criticize my characters. Kennedi is a genius due to certain genetics. From Chapter 28 to the end of the book is a development for Kennedi. And right now, Kennedi is 7.

Janiel Cabrales

I've been trying to get into this story but I find the dialogue really inappropriate. a 5 yr old doesn't think or talk like this. Im really trying to get into it but it feels like a teenager rather than a 5-7 yr old girl. I have 5-6 yr old kids n this dialogue is not right. is it just me?

VIEW ALL COMMENTS