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Chapter 28: Overwhelmed

Married? Has she heard it right? There is no way they would be getting married at this day—at this hour at that. It was utterly unannounced and unexpected. What's gotten into him to decide they would be getting married all of a sudden?

However, as though she was shocked, something in her belly rumbled as her heartbeat went insanely fast and loud. Perhaps, it was butterflies. What is this kind of feeling? Why does she feel this way right now? It seems as though the air was becoming hard to take in. She can't breathe evenly as everything suddenly becomes overwhelming.

She stood there, dumbfounded.

Out of nowhere, Reezha appeared holding another ring. She handed it to Margarette who seemed still to be in dazed.

When she felt that Reezha put something on her hand, she finally snapped and looked down on her palm. It was a ring, the same one with the ring that Xavier was holding. Though it was kinda big and less feminine than it.

"Good evening, everyone. We have gathered here to witnes
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So yeah. My friend suggested that I should be doing fast paced story, but it's kind of hard especially if you're writing a mafia book. But let's see. đŸ„° I'll try to lessen the description and focus more on dialogues and interaction between characters. I'll try to become a better author and will always accepts constructive criticisms to improve more. â˜ș

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Donna Barrett
I think your doing fine, yes there is always room for improvement, however it is not necessary.
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