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Lily is one of the six kids of Alpha Edward and the ugly duckling of the family. She doesn't stand out and doesn't excel at things like her sister does. She is once again reminded of her imperfections when she meets the rude Alpha Osiris, who insults Lily behind her back.
Her response to his insult surprises Osiris, and his interest in this young woman is peaked.
Alpha Osiris is known to be ruthless and blunt, but behind the tough exterior is a man reluctantly looking for his mate and the family he's been missing since both his parents died.
Although Osiris tries to fight his wolf and his heart, he has a hard time staying away from Lily. But when he confesses his feelings towards her, Lilly's reaction is the opposite of what Osiris had hoped.
It isn't until they begin to write letters to each other that they get to know each other better, and soon even Lily can't deny her feelings any longer. After Lily's birthday, she finally admits to having feelings for Osiris but is terrified he won't be her mate.
Thankfully, the Moon Goddess has picked out Osiris and Lily as true mates, and life at the Iron River Pack will never be the same when Lily becomes Luna Lily.
Rogue attacks, family drama, pregnancies, human hunters, and more trouble come across Lily and Osiris' paths, but together they always find a way to move past it and overcome.
Alpha Osiris doesn't just feature the love story of Osiris and Lily; you'll meet new characters and read their most inner thoughts as they find their true mate or get a new chance at finding love after losing their mate.
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The Stolen Alpha 85. Friends
Zayn’s povI heard Eve’s feet walking away from me. Seeing her naked made me feel things I didn’t want to feel and wasn’t ready to feel."Wait.""Why?" Eve replied.I sighed, still not able to turn around. I couldn’t face her like this right now, but I could talk to her. Eve wasn’t feeling okay, and I couldn’t just let her walk away."You’re not okay. Tell me why you said I was easy to talk to."Eve scoffed. Yeah, and then we both fell asleep next to each other, and you avoided me for months."It wasn’t just that we fell asleep next to each other. She was in my arms. And it was the best sleep I'd had in a very long time. I instantly felt guilty towards Talia, as if I were cheating on her somehow."She makes us feel better." Nadeem said, but it sounded more like he wanted to use Eve to feel better but not give her what she needed in return."You don’t know what she needs. You have never asked her." Nadeem added.I didn’t reply to my wolf; instead, I focused my attention back on Eve. "Pl
The Stolen Alpha 86. Cook
Eve’s pov"So any Dutch names that are fucking cool?" Luna Leia asked.I shrugged my shoulders, "I don’t know. Dutch people use a lot of English names, but maybe Moos or Koen for a boy. Maan or Roos for a girl. I really don’t know; I just named Storm after my father, Mathijs, and his first name I liked when I was younger. But there’s no need to include a Dutch name."Luna Leia seemed to think about it: "And they’ll have to deal with the pronunciation all the fucking time. Like your name is pronounced differently too, right?""Yes, it’s Evelien, but I’m used to people saying Eve by now." I said, nodding my head."Okay, now that we have that out of the fucking way, tell me about Zayn."My eyes went wide, and I started to blush instantly. "Tell you what?""Well, he’s been coming here to take you on a walk for three weeks now, and I was just wondering what was going on. I’ve seen the way he fucking looks at you.""We’re friends. We both needed a friend, and he’s easy to talk to."Leia didn
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The Stolen Alpha 89. Talia
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