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Chapter 18
Carlos' brothel kept operating even with his absence. His men thought that he's still inside his office enjoying. It's just been a day since he locked himself up inside. No one saw the girl leave, so they assumed that she's still inside.
Their customers are all satisfied. They keep coming at no particular time of the day. Some would come in the morning, afternoon, in the evening, and even at midnight. That is why his men didn't even think about disturbing him. Plus, no trouble has arisen.
"No! Let me go! Get off me!"
Carlos' men were disturbed when one of the girls started screaming. She was the newest and the last one to arrive. Also, the youngest among the girls. The girl was only twelve years old. Her birthday is next year.
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