Hey, my awesome readers!
I know I had discussed with ya'll about writing the next story about Susi but I think I want to write Opal's next first. I have so many fantastic ideas for her story and I already have the first few chapters thought up. I'm planning to write a ton of it before I publish it here first so I can have my two editors go over it instead of like Lili's story. After I finish Lili's story, both of my editors will be going through and editing the whole thing to make it PERFECT. I know I suck in some places with writing and I don't want to finish this story until they have both gone through and made changes.
My plan is to have them go through the first many chapters of Save Me, My Warlock before I publish any of it here to give you guys the quality you deserve. After Save Me, My Alpha, My Mate is finished with the editing, it will be available in book format too. I plan to merge a bunch of chapters too but we shall see where everything goes. Depending on how much everyone enjoys my stories, I will continue to write more. I do want to get to Su's story eventually but I'm having severe writer's block with it.
I don't want to give you the typical abused female lead story who falls in love with the Alpha. We all know Su doesn't want to have that sort of responsibility. Not only is she this strong, loved Beta, but she is also one of my favorites in the story.
What are your opinions?
Lilith's POVSeeing Simon, hurt more than words could describe. I desperately wanted to run into his arms and hear his snide comments but he stayed silent. It was almost as if he was another whole person. The cocky jokester I had grown to love was missing and replacing that shell was a cowering dog.Nova whimpered for him and I wanted to do the same. He caused feelings to stir with betrayal as he stood beside his new mate - the same one who almost got me raped and my other mate killed. When we were in the office, I did catch on to him trying to stand up for me but she shut him down and he OBEYED her. I was appalled.Now as I stand here behind Connor, all I could do was worry. Even if Jenny loses, I don't believe my mate would kill Simon but if he loses, she will kill me. Was he strong enough to have another battle after just being healed by his pack? The growing frustration towards this day, in general, was beginning to get on my nerves
Simon's POVThe scream generating from Lil as Connor's back broke sent shivers down my spine. One mistake he made was allowing himself to believe he had the upper hand when Jenny faked her trip.My mate hovered over Connor's body and jammed a hind claw into his chest. The razored nails on her paw pierced his chest and blood trickled from his mouth. As she stood there, pinning him down, she threw her head back and howled."Get out of here now!" I shouted at Su and Lil as I took off to stand beside Jen.I didn't look back to see if they had heeded me and worked on controlling my thoughts so she couldn't find out about what I had planned. Connor seemed dead but I could hear his heart struggling to push blood through his body. The hope that Jenny thought he was dead, kept me pushing yet it was another thing I couldn't have playing in my head.Taking my place beside my mate, she turned to face the rest of the pack and so did I. L
My heart raced at the thought of someone going through the basement for Talia. Connor was at risk and that terrified me. He was the hope I had left that we could overrule Jenny. The moment my fear rose, I had to instantly smother it. If she smelt any fear from me, she might choose to listen in to my thoughts or demand me to tell her why I was afraid. No chances could be taken.“Want me to go get her? Pretty sure she’s still in love with me from a spell we used within the last 3 days.” I offered.Jen's eyebrow rose. “She’s in love with you?”Ethan snorted but I responded with a shrug. “It’s a long story but yeah, she is spellbound to believe I’m her mate. Talia would be less likely to fight with me than someone else.”“That’s curious. Remind me to push you further on the reason why later.” She waved her hand at me. “Go grab her.”With her dismissal, I rushed fr
Lilith's POV Connor: I love you. That was the last thing my mate had said to me after being crushed by Jenny. His life left him right before my eyes and the urge to fight back almost consumed me. If it wasn’t for Su pulling me back once again, I could’ve died with him and this broken heart would be nonexistent. As Susi drove us to Luca's, I cried. I didn’t care if she judged me for being weak. Everything that happened to Connor within the last 48 hours was my fault. If I hadn’t been his mate, she would’ve mated with him and he’d still be alive. He would’ve never suffered at almost dying by Tim’s claws either. Even Opal wouldn’t have suffered so badly if it wasn’t for me. My vest ached worse than breaking my collarbone in third grade. A broken bone healed but a broken heart would always have a hole in it. Susi kept one hand on the steering wheel and held my hand with her other one. Every time my crying got louder; she
Connor’s POV Dior: Connor, wake up. … Dior: I need your help to heal. … Dior: Connor… I can’t draw power from Lili or Susi without you. … Dior: Please wake up… … Dior: I can try to reach out to Kia and Nova without you, but I still can’t draw their power unless you wake! … Simon’s POV Jenny insisted we leave Talia back in her cell and make Ethan drive us in his truck to keep an eye on her new Beta. Her concern for me was minimal as she demanded I ride in the bed of the truck. We arrived at the address Talia gave us, but the dirt road resulted in a dead-end. When he put the truck in park and climbed out, I could feel fear rising in him. I assumed it was fear of Jenny’s anger after realizing she was lied to. She jumped out of the truck and paced the grass at the e
Lilith’s POV We spent no time at all planning our revenge. Luca stated that if he was present, they would automatically think something was up. Instead of being with us on the field, he would be hiding somewhere in the woods. Having him stay undetected was crucial for our plan to work. Before I was instructed to text Simon, Luca placed a large diameter spell and made small markers that only we would be able to identify. The markers were sections of grass pulled from the ground, resulting in several bald spots. If someone else were to notice the spots, they would see that they turned into a giant circle. Luca was adamant about neither Susi nor I being in the circle when Jenny stepped into it. If either of us were in the spell’s area the moment he began drawing her power, it would drain us as well. He mentioned that there was no guarantee that we would survive the drain if we made that major mistake. The Warlock had an enchanted jar wi
The next chapter will be in Susi’s POV. I know I mentioned not putting the story in other POVs anymore but Susi is critical for the next chapter. As we get closer to the story's ending, it will be unknown if our main 3 lovebirds will survive. Connor is still on the brink of death... Simon may die if his Lykos dies.... Lilith may die from the spell draining her.... Everyone may die because of Jenny if she survived.... Everything is in Susi’s hands right now. How will she keep the pack under control being just a Beta? If there is a Vargulf alive still, will she be enough to kill it?
Susi’s POV Everything happened too fast. Ethan stopped the fight when he thought Jenny would lose but I could not get to Lili fast enough. I could feel her power slipping away and knew she would die if someone didn’t step in soon. When my hope began to slip, Simon had used inhuman speed to reach her and Jenny. I feared he would assist his mate over our Luna, but he proved me wrong as he snapped his mate's neck and ripped her head off. In a swift motion, he tossed it further into the middle of the enchanted circle. Without hesitation, he grabbed our dying Luna and began to drag her out of the circle. The longer he remained inside the spell, the harder it was for him to retrieve Lili. By the time I had reached them to help, he had her pulled out of it and was crying into her. Our Luna was still in wolf form but wasn’t moving or breathing. Simon’s pain rushed through our pack bonds as his loyalty officially switched back to our side. His heart