ALL Chapters & Episodes of Crudus' Violins by ATua Koeinata - Page 3

All Chapters of Crudus' Violins: Chapter 21 - Chapter 30

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You'll Never Know the Outcome when You Haven't Given It a Go

6 years later on…“You’re not my son! You’re such a big mistake I’ve ever committed!” screamed Queenie Qamra.One slap landed on Erito Ricky’s face. Erito Ricky fell onto the floor near the stairs to the first floor.Erito wiped off the brink of his lips. His lips began to be bleeding. Yet, Erito never shouted or screamed or yelled out loudly. He also rarely cried. He just kept quiet. Whenever he couldn’t stand the beat, the kick, and all kinds of torture from his biological mother, he could merely faint and lie down on the floor unconsciously.“Every time I look at you, you remind me of your father! What a cruel and rubbish man he is! He must be having some fun with that woman, with your garbage brother, inside their big mansion! He always leaves me alone! He always leaves me alone here in this mansion, with all my pain and suffering here, with all my sob and tears here! He never cares! He never love

Let Me Settle up with Him by Myself

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Arriving at school, Erito Ricky just walked direct to his class. He wasn’t seen talking and chatting with his schoolmates. He just sat down quietly in his class, then took out his notebooks and textbooks. Erito Ricky was used to killing his time before the bell rang by reading his textbooks or doing the upcoming exercises in his textbooks which was about to be discussed by the teachers. “Hey, Erito Ricky… Perhaps you want to join the baseball team in this school. I’m the team captain. You can meet up with me and we can talk about it. Are you interested?” A slightly short and chubby boy suddenly approached Erito Ricky and stood in front of him. “Sorry… No time for that…” replied Erito Ricky coldly and flatly – without any facial expressions. “What?” uttered the chubby boy being slightly astonished. So far, there hadn’t been any boy in that school who was brave enough to reject his demand and request. If he asked a particular boy to join in his baseball

We Both Come from Two Different World

Crudus' Violins/ATua Koeinata

Erito Ricky and Eriwan Rocky didn’t go to the same school, didn’t go to the same English course, and didn’t even go to the same karate club. Erito Ricky didn’t want to go to the same places as his elder brother did. This brought really disappointing and miserable impacts for Eriwan Rocky, being rejected by his biological younger brother. Yet, Eriwan Rocky could solely kept smiling, kept being cheerful, and kept trying his all in to get closer and closer to his younger brother. Erito Ricky and Eriwan Rocky merely went to the same swimming club. That was the request from Apollo Frias and Columba Rajadi, though. Being a kid, Erito Ricky felt that he needed to obey what had been said by his parents. He just followed their request without any protests, without any queries. “Hi, Erito… Have you been here long?” asked Eriwan Rocky approaching his younger brother after half hour of his swimming. Erito Ricky turned to his elder brother. It turned out as though he was

A Mysterious Pain (part 1)

Crudus' Violins/ATua Koeinata

2 years later on… Two years passed by without a lot of differences. Erito and Eriwan just lived their lives in their each path. Each of them was going to their own schools, to their own English courses, to their own karate clubs, to their own music clubs, to the other places of their own, and joined their own competitions. Eriwan was merely living his happy, cheerful, perfect, as well as magnificent life. Meanwhile, Erito was still living under the pressure – sometimes torture – from his biological mother. If Erito could avoid his mom, he would try his best not to accidentally bump into her at the corridors or the other rooms in the big mansion. Yet, occasionally he couldn’t avoid his mom all the time. When he bumped into his mom accidentally, he had to be ready for the tortures his mom would do to him. This afternoon was also the time for his torture to begin. When he bumped into his mum at the front yard at the time he was about to go to the swimming pool,

A Mysterious Pain (part 2)

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“What’s happened, Eriwan? Any injuries from our practice today?” asked the tutor worriedly. He knew Eriwan’s identity. Causing some accidental injuries to his body meant big troubles for his karate club. “No idea, Sir… Suddenly there’s this terrible pain all over my body… Ouch… Ouch… Help me, Sir…” shouted Eriwan helplessly on the floor again. Eriwan kept lying on the floor, rolling his body to the left and to the right. After checking his whole body, Eriwan’s tutor concluded that there were no injuries at all on Eriwan’s whole body. Yet, seeing from his agony facial expression, from the perspiration all over his body, Eriwan’s karate tutor concluded that it was impossible for Eriwan to tell him lies by acting he was in pain. Moreover, Eriwan was a good boy who never told lies or played tricks on everyone before. Eriwan’s karate tutor went to the kitchen to bring a glass or warm plain water for him. Eriwan’s friends at the karate club began to surround him ag

What Are You Planning?

Crudus' Violins/ATua Koeinata

Eriwan’s eyes got wider and bigger.“And you guys only kept quiet and didn’t report it to me, to Dad or to Mom…?”“Erito himself doesn’t want to let the cat out of the bag, Eriwan. He himself thinks that even if he speaks up, nobody will believe him. Every time you come to the mansion, Madam Queenie Qamra always shows her love and attention to Erito, doesn’t she? But, every time you come back, Madam Queenie Qamra begins to torture, to beat, to slap, and even to kick Erito. Erito often gets serious and worse injuries like these every time he ends up being tortured by his own biological mom.”“It might be because my dad hasn’t been responding to her love these times. I know Erito’s mom also loves my dad very madly and deeply, but these times my dad only loves my mom. He doesn’t love Madam Queenie Qamra. He doesn’t have the same feeling towards her.”“That become

Forgive Me

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“Yeah… For one week ahead, I’m Erito Ricky… He’s Eriwan Rocky… You can tell him once he’s woken up, Uncle Bonito…”Uncle Bonito shook his head quickly and violently.“Madam Queenie Qamra can tell that you’re not Erito. She can tell quickly that you’re Eriwan… I’m afraid you can be caught by Madam Queenie Qamra with your hands in the cookie jar, Eriwan…”“Wanna bet with me? If you’re worried and afraid that I can be caught with my hands in the cookie jar, why don’t we give it a whirl first?” challenged Eriwan Rocky.Uncle Bonito kept quiet afterwards. He swallowed his saliva into his choked throat.***Several minutes passed by. Eriwan asked Uncle Bonito to stay outside first for a while. He locked the door of his younger brother’s room inside. Slowly but certainly, Eriwan began to take off his younger brother&rs

I Won't Forgive Her!

Crudus' Violins/ATua Koeinata

Eriwan Rocky arrived at his younger brother’s mansion at around eight o’clock in the late evening.“Call me if you can’t deal with Madam Queenie Qamra, Eriwan…” said Uncle Bonito Selasar worriedly.“Okay… Take it easy, Uncle… I know how to deal with it and I know clearly what I’m doing at the moment…” said Eriwan Rocky easily.“Oh, gosh… I can’t help not worrying about you, Eriwan…” uttered Uncle Bonito in his depressed manner.“Relax… Relax, Uncle… There’s nothing going to happen, Uncle… Trust me… Tonight you can sleep well I think…” said Eriwan relaxingly.Uncle Bonito just nodded his head. Eriwan got off the car easily and in his relaxing fashion. He knew what to do already. At this time, he thought Madam Queenie Qamra mightn’t have got to sleep yet.Eriwan slung his bag on

The Telepathic Talk Between Two Brothers

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Madam Queenie Qamra was still standing at her position. Her son had really changed now. She couldn’t step up onto her son’s head anymore. She couldn’t laugh and smile above her son’s pain and suffering again. Realizing her son had grown up and been able to rebel against her at the moment, her whole body was trembling really violently.“Clean it up after you’ve changed my blanket, my pillow case and my bed sheet…” said Eriwan in his relaxing manner again to the maid inside the room – back to normal.Eriwan now turned to Madam Queenie Qamra who was still standing on her spot with her whole body trembling really violently.“What are you doing there? Oh, Mom… It’s been really late in the evening already… Please get into your room right now… Have a good sleep and have nice dreams…” said Eriwan smiling calmly.Slowly Madam Queenie Qamra dragged her feet to her r

Quips & Quarrels at the Dining Table

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Morning had come again. Eriwan opened up his eyes and smiled in his full satisfaction. After he brushed his teeth and washed his face, he wore Erito’s jogging clothes and shoes. Eriwan went out for jogging for a while.He jogged for half hour around the neighborhood where Erito lived. Every time he met the neighbors around Erito’s mansion, he greeted them and smiled to them. Then, there came out a little bit of whispering about Erito Frias who had changed in his characteristics and personalities – according to the neighbors around.“Erito Frias has changed I think… Just now he bumped into me and he greeted me…”“Oh yeah? You’re talking about the Erito Frias living in the biggest mansion in this neighborhood, aren’t you?”“Yeah, there’s no any other Erito Frias who’s always lonely, quiet, never smiles, never greets others and never talks to the neighbors around here&helli

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